"The Unfriend" by Steven Moffatt.
Burton Joyce Players.
While on a cruise ship holiday, Peter and Debbie befriend Elsa: a lusty, Trump-loving widow with an outrageous sense of humour from Denver, USA. They agree to stay in touch – because no one you ever meet while on holiday ever really does, do they?
When Elsa invites herself to stay a few months later, they decide to look her up online. And that's when Peter and Debbie decide to Google her and learn the truth about Elsa Jean Krakowski. Deadly danger has just boarded a flight to London! But how do you protect all that you love from mortal peril without seeming, well, a bit impolite? Because guess who's coming... to murder!
Peter is played by Danny Longbottom. Peter doesn't like to face situations head on, unless forced to do so by his wife, Debbie. He's a busy, busy man after all, and doesn't need the constant interference from his neighbour. I enjoyed the gradual increase in the eventual "red mist" brought on by the visitor, their sons and the neighbour, to which Paul brought the eruption of Peter's nerves to an eventual climax that brings him to his knees in frustration. I last saw Danny a couple of years ago and noted his comedic excellence at that time. With this character he gets to show how good his visual comedy is via his facial expressions.
Debbie, Peter's wife, is played by Claire Buckley. From the opening scene where Debbie has to badger Peter to pack his case, two hours before they are due to disembark their cruise, it's plain to see who was in charge in that relationship. Debbie also did all the digging and planning to try and cancel Elsa's visit, but you know what they say about the best laid plans! It's nice to see Claire back again with a lead role, and such a great one as this. There's a particular scene in the second act with quite a tirade, which was executed so well that it, rightly so, brought an unexpected burst of applause from the almost packed hall. As with Danny, her facial recognition of the script is perfect.
Elsa is played by Sheila Millington. I love the way Elsa twists every negative into her being the victim, but just wait until the final scene! This is another fabulous character-driven performance by Sheila, who has never been a stranger to comedy roles.
Alex, the first of the two teenage children we get to see, is played by Charlie Caudwell. Alex is the typical teenager, glued to his games console and rarely venturing out of his bedroom. Alex changes throughout the play, thanks to Elsa's advice and understanding friendship. I don't remember seeing Charlie on stage previously, but this young man is a cracking actor. He is completely natural and at ease playing a teenage boy and all the baggage that goes with a role like this. His comedy is delivered slickly and, as with the adults in the cast, facial recognition of the script and comedy moments are brilliantly projected to the audience. He is one to look out for and I am really pleased that he has moved from behind the sound operation desk, to stage front and centre.
I must also mention a skill which isn't that easy to master on stage, and that is the ability to use a telephone and make the audience believe that there's a two way conversation happening. You could hear in your head the voice on the other end of the phone, and the spacing of the script to represent this was done perfectly by Charlie.
Rosie, the teenage daughter is played by Jessie Murdock. Rosie is another great role, and almost the opposite of Alex in several ways. There's that contrast in sons and daughters in a relationship that is such a natural part of a family with boys and girls, things that the daughter finds repulsive about her brother and his room for example are all brought to the fore in these roles. With a little encouragement from Elsa though she develops into a girl who is happy to give and receive hugs from her parents, and Elsa, and even compliments her brother to her parents. I remember Jessie from being in "Daisy Pulls It Off" by BJP and the relationship between the two teenage children in this comedy is a lovely arc to see.
It's great to see the younger acting generation being so confident on stage, especially in a comedy production, and showing incredible maturity with their acting skills.
The Neighbour is played by Alistair Dobb. Debbie and Peter's neighbour is always popping round regarding an issue in the garden, and when I saw always, I mean every five minutes or so, adding to the stress already building from Elsa's visit. Alistair's vocal delivery is perfect with his pace and deliberation of the script, stretching out the words to wring every drop of comedy from the role. If you've ever watched the comedy programme "Friday Night Dinner", the character reminds me so much of the neighbour in that show, and especially with the vocal pacing.
The final character in the play is PC Junkin, the police officer who has been appointed to have a chat, or follow up enquiries regarding the death of someone who Elsa had come into contact with the week before joining Debbie and Peter. Junkin is played by Steve Armstrong. There's a lovely section which I can only describe as toilet humour. Well, what I mean is that the scene is all about PC Junkin asking to use the toilet with Peter and Debbie wanting to know about a certain sort of movement!!
Directed by Avril McCormick who has, along with her brilliant cast, brought this very funny piece of theatre to the Burton Joyce audience. In the original script the teenage children are both boys, Alex and Rhys, so it's really nice, and different to see a brother and sister relationship, which adds a whole new dynamic to their relationship and the feel of the play and the story. The timing and pace are brilliant, which is what comedy is all about, so nothing more can be asked of a Director when these things are in place. The audiences laughter, volume wise and quantity wise obviously shows that the whole cast and Director have succeeded in hitting the comedy nail on the head.
Set design is by Chris Mercer. The set starts off with three deckchairs which is where we first meet Peter, Elsa and Debbie. The deckchairs are removed and we go straight into the living room and kitchen of the main house. The stairs, stage left, lead up to a believable set of bedrooms off stage. A large screen shows the audience some of the things that Peter and Debbie see on their laptops. This part of the creative in the show is thanks to Dan Miller (89 Design).
I would have liked more of a separation between the on deck scene with the deckchairs and the house scene, as it looked as if the deckchairs were actually in the house itself. Maybe having the house in the dark in the background with just the front section with the deckchairs illuminated, but I'm being very picky here because I've seen the play before.
Stage managed by Molly Fitches.
Sound design is by Gregory Nicholas. The sound cues were all on time and a nice choice of music soundbites.
Lighting is by Jenny Cowan. A fairly simple design with the lighting design, but that is all the comedy asks for. Well operated advising of the separation of the five scenes in the play.
Prompt tonight was Kate Purdue, who was only needed on one occasion, right at the start. Well, it is opening night after all. Some people, who actually notice the prompt, may not realise what a concentration fuelled job this is, but the Prompt has to be on the top of their game to make sure that they don't have any lapses, just in case an actor has a lapse of their own. They are the vital safety net for the actor, and they have to follow every line unwaveringly.
I keep spouting on about how Directors can change the feel of a play, which is why I never tire of seeing shows that I've seen before with a different Director at the helm. They can make a play have a whole new feel, as Avril has done with her vision of the story.
For anyone who has been on holiday and clicked with another fellow holiday maker, professing that they will keep in touch, after the holiday has ended. This show is for you. It's also for anyone who loves a good belly laugh, or just needs a bit of cheering up.
"The Unfriend" is at The Burton Joyce Village Hall until Saturday 26 September.






















